Much better Mimi, there are still some holes in the posts but this is much improved and shows me that you did have a lot of the work completed.
I was hoping to see some drafts of the main products but these are not on your blog. I know you have been toiling over the design process / developing ideas but i think now you need to finalise your ideas and aim to complete drafts of each product which I can review with you.
Carl.
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